Isis ([info]isiscolo) wrote in [info]stop_drop_porn,

Horizontal Mambo by Isis ([info]isiscolo) - Fraser/RayK, NC17

Title: Horizontal Mambo
Author: Isis ([info]isiscolo)
Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: NC17 all the way, baby.
[info]brooklinegirl gave me the prompt: tipsy. Thanks to [info]malnpudl for instabeta.



"One two three," muttered Fraser under his breath. "One two three, one two three, turn around, one two - why are we stopping?"

Ray spun over to the stereo, jabbed a finger at the 'pause' button. "Because you are just not getting it, Fraser."

"Am I not doing the moves correctly? I thought -"

"Oh, you're doing them correctly." He ran a hand through his hair and sighed. "You are doing them perfect, one-hundred-percent, a-okay Mountie correctly. But that ain't dancing."

"I beg your pardon." Fraser went to the couch and sat down, and Jesus, he even sat like a Mountie, all stiff and at-attention like he was still wearing the uniform instead of jeans and a regular shirt. Then he shifted just a little bit - not relaxing, exactly, but his shoulders weren't quite so square and his jaw wasn't quite so set - and whammo, the Mountie disappeared and it was just Fraser, looking sad. "I know, Ray. I appreciate your efforts. I just feel as though I ought to be able to dance for Frannie's wedding."

"You can do it, Fraser. You just gotta loosen up. Let the music flow through you. Let it speak to you." Ray took a swallow of his beer, then paused. "Hey, I got an idea. Stella, she's a great dancer, but she always used to have the same problem. Too stiff, always fighting the music instead of going with it." He sank onto the couch next to Fraser and held out his bottle. "But after she had a drink, she was smooth as could be."

Fraser eyed the bottle as though he thought it might bite him. "I hardly think I'd dance better if I were drunk."

"Not drunk. Just relaxed."

"I don't care for beer."

"Okay," said Ray, getting up and doing a two-step toward the kitchen. "I can work with that. Let me see what…you like milk, right?"

"Ray -"

"Quiet, Fraser, I'm making you a drink, here." He checked the cabinet under the sink; yeah, still half a bottle of Kahlua left. He didn't drink it much except sometimes in coffee. And there was vodka, and ice. Perfect.

He came out of the kitchen and presented it to Fraser with a flourish. "Ta-da!"

Fraser sniffed at the glass suspiciously before taking a cautious sip. "Hmm. Tastes a bit like chocolate milk."

"Chocolate milk with a kick," said Ray, grinning. Stella had always loved White Russians. Kind of a girly drink, but hey, whatever it took.

"Yes, I can taste the kick." Still, he took another sip, and then a swallow, and then, Ray noted with amusement, an honest-to-God gulp. "This is actually quite good."

"Now I know what to order you when we go out drinking," said Ray.

"But we don't go -"

"Yeah, yeah, just a joke. You ready to try again?"

Fraser tipped back the glass and drained it, setting it on the coffee table, then got to his feet in a much more fluid motion than anything else he'd managed this evening. "Ready."

Ray started the music again and moved into position, setting Fraser's right hand on his waist and taking his left in his own right hand. "Okay. Pretend I'm Frannie. Let's go."

One two three, one two three. It was a little weird to be dancing the girl's part, but Fraser had to learn to lead somehow. And the drink seemed to have helped; he was still counting the beat under his breath, but now he was gliding rather than lurching. Ray pulled him a little closer, let himself melt against Fraser's broad chest, into the circle of his arms. "Much better," he murmured, and apparently that was a mistake, because Fraser came to an abrupt stop.

"What's wrong?" asked Ray, without moving away. Felt too good to move away: Fraser's arms around him, Fraser's heat against his chest, Fraser's breath gusting past his face, smelling like milk and alcohol.

"I, er. Your voice distracted me and I lost count."

"Frannie's probably going to be talking nonstop. Better get used to it."

Fraser laughed, a low, deep sound that rippled through his body, made it vibrate against Ray's. "You're not a very convincing Frannie." The hand on Ray's waist started to move in almost imperceptible circles.

"You knocking my acting skills?"

"Never. You're a man of many talents." The circles became larger, dipping down toward Ray's ass, and Fraser moved his head forward a fraction, brushed his lips against Ray's cheek. "For example, I truly enjoy dancing with you."

On a hunch Ray pulled Fraser just that much closer, sliding forward, pushing his hips against Fraser's. Might be something interesting in those jeans….oh, yeah. Somebody was interested. "Seems to me what you want to do is the horizontal mambo."

"I thought you were teaching me the waltz," said Fraser, but Ray could feel his mouth shaping a smile against his cheek, and when he turned his head, Fraser's eyes were sparkling.

"Horizontal waltz, then." He leaned over to press their mouths together. The hand on his ass stilled; it was as if Fraser could only concentrate on one thing at a time, and what he wanted to concentrate on now was Ray's mouth. His tongue swiped in, bringing the sweet milky taste of the drink with it, and his lips slid softly around the edges of Ray's lips, exploring. Gently Ray loosed his fingers from Fraser's other hand and slid it to his shoulder, caressing his neck, twining into his hair.

When Fraser drew back slightly, Ray advanced, tracing a path from Fraser's mouth to his jawbone with his lips, soft kisses on stubbled skin; Fraser arched his neck and Ray dove in, tonguing at the sweet spot under his ear until Fraser moaned and twisted in his arms. "You said horizontal," said Fraser, his voice breathless, and Ray laughed, pulling him down to the couch.

"I can do horizontal," said Ray. "Can you do naked?"

"I can do naked," said Fraser, with a smoldering look at Ray that ought to have been illegal and probably was. Went straight to his dick, anyway, which had been starting to perk up ever since Fraser had squeezed his ass; the expression in Fraser's eyes just finished the job, which made Ray even more anxious to get out of his jeans. Shoes off, pants and underwear off, shirt off, and he turned back to…

"Holy fuck," said Ray, staring at Fraser, who was sprawled across the couch in the most un-Mountie-like pose Ray had ever seen.

"I can do naked," said Fraser smugly.

"I can see that!" Jesus. Kiss-reddened lips, mussed hair, arms and legs languidly draped as though all of his bones had evaporated. He looked like a fucking harem girl. Harem boy. Whatever. Which made Ray feel vaguely guilty, because it was his fault, sort of. "Look, Frase, I didn't mean to get you drunk and take advantage of you."

"I'm not drunk. Just tipsy."

"Still …"

Fraser reached up to take Ray's hand. "It's not taking advantage if I want it, too," he said, pulling Ray down on top of him. Skin against skin, warm and alive, and Ray gasped.

"Fraser …"

"Considering we've been sleeping together for some time now, I hardly think you can blame the alcohol," said Fraser as he nuzzled against Ray's neck. His hands skimmed down Ray's sides, light, butterfly touches that made Ray squirm and wriggle, trying to bring more of his skin in contact with Fraser's, rubbing his cock into Fraser's soft, warm belly, feeling Fraser's cock pushing wetly between his thighs.

"Not the alcohol. O-kay," said Ray, moving in for another hot kiss. Under him Fraser shifted, then brought a hand up to their faces, turning his mouth away from Ray's to lick his own palm, slowly and deliberately. Another slow stripe up his palm, his eyes never leaving Ray's; then he reached down and snaked his hand between them, enveloping Ray's cock in that warm, wet hand.

"It was your dancing," whispered Fraser, low and husky, and at that moment Ray didn't care if it was the dancing or the vodka or aliens beaming sex rays at them from outer space, as long as Fraser kept stroking, kept squeezing, kept sliding against him. As long as he kept rolling his hips, thrusting into the space between Ray's legs.

On the stereo, the waltz ended and a Lindy began to play. The world contracted to just Ray's apartment - just his couch - just his dick, trapped between Fraser's sure hand and the slow staccato thrusts of Fraser's dick, slippery with pre-come, pressing behind Ray's balls, urging him on.

Fraser looked up at him from under half-lidded eyes. His hair had fallen across his forehead, making him look unbearably young and sweet. "The way you dance," he said, punctuating his words with a twist of his hand that wrenched a groan from Ray's throat. "It makes me want to fuck you."

"Jesus!" It was like an electric shock, hearing the coarse words in Fraser's voice, and his hips jerked helplessly, pushing into Fraser's tightening grip as he came. His arms gave out, and he collapsed against Fraser's chest. "Jesus," he muttered again. "Give a guy some warning."

"Mmm," said Fraser, slipping his come-covered hand lower, spreading the wetness between Ray's legs, and it was probably going to make a mess on the couch but Ray didn't care because Fraser was moving again, his cock sliding in the slick space he'd created. Ray squeezed his legs together and Fraser gasped, throwing back his head, murmuring things Ray mostly couldn't make out. He bent down to mouth at Fraser's exposed neck, feeling the syllables vibrate against his lips, yes and God and oh, Ray, Ray, Ray, shuddering into his arms, coming between his thighs.

For a few minutes they lay tangled together, the only sounds their breathing and the cheerful Lindy music. Then Ray rolled away and sopped up the worst of the mess with tissues, stepping into the kitchen for a wet dishtowel to take care of the rest. When he came back he had to stop and stare at Fraser for a moment: Jesus, what a wet dream he was, breathing hard and covered with come. "Here," he said, pushing the towel at Fraser, who carefully cleaned himself up.

"How did I do?" said Fraser as he dabbed at the few spots that had made it down to the cushions.

"You gotta ask?" Grinning, Ray slid in next to him on the couch and nuzzled against his neck.

"The dancing, I mean. That was an excellent suggestion about the alcohol. I think it helped quite a bit."

"Fraser, my friend," said Ray, shaking his head, "if this is what happens when you dance with a little buzz on, I don't think I want you dancing with Frannie."

Fraser blushed. "I wouldn't - that is - her dancing wouldn't have the same effect on me."

"It better not. I don't mind if you and Frannie want to do a waltz or two, okay." Fraser nodded, smiling, and wrapped an arm around him, pulling him against his chest; the Lindy came to an end and a slow foxtrot began to play. "But you don't do the horizontal mambo with anybody but me."





I tag [info]the_antichris! Your prompt, should you choose to accept it: coffee.

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[info]elementalv

August 29 2006, 03:09:59 UTC 5 years ago

Ray K./Fraser dance fics are a huge kink for me. And this? This was ... guh!

Thank you for the lovely images.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:26:22 UTC 5 years ago

Glad you liked it!

[info]justbreathe80

August 29 2006, 03:15:07 UTC 5 years ago

God, I LOVE Fraser and Ray dancing. SO MUCH. YAY!

This is great, so hot and I LOVE Fraser loosening up a bit.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:26:53 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! Fraser can loosen up any time on my watch, you bet.

[info]tallykat668

August 29 2006, 03:28:06 UTC 5 years ago

Jeez, I love dance porn; what a way to start the ball rolling! *clappy clappy*

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:27:26 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

[info]ultra_chrome

August 29 2006, 03:29:44 UTC 5 years ago

Mmm...doesn't get much tastier than this!

Dancing, drinking AND couch sex. You have many talents. :)

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:28:28 UTC 5 years ago

Hee, three great tastes! Thank you kindly!

[info]vanillafluffy

August 29 2006, 03:36:21 UTC 5 years ago

Hubba-hubba!

"Now I know what to order you when we go out drinking," said Ray.

"But we don't go -"


Bottoms up! I mean, thumbs up! (Yeah, that's what I meant!)


[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:28:43 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you. Have a drink!

[info]shayheyred

August 29 2006, 03:52:22 UTC 5 years ago

Brain...'splodes...

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:29:16 UTC 5 years ago

*mops up bits of grey matter* :-)

[info]pearl_o

August 29 2006, 03:58:30 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, YAY. This is charming!

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:29:36 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you kindly!

[info]gaffsie

August 29 2006, 04:38:44 UTC 5 years ago

Wow, that was niiice.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:29:55 UTC 5 years ago

Glad you liked it!

[info]blueswan9

August 29 2006, 04:42:02 UTC 5 years ago

Dancing and couch sex, yay! I liked your fic very much.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:30:19 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you. I vote YES for dancing and couch sex!

[info]etben

August 29 2006, 04:45:52 UTC 5 years ago

oh, excellent! just the thing to come home to!

...except, crap. now I want a white russian! *plots raid on the upstairs cabinet where the alcohol lives*

of course, I also want Ray and Fraser to come and dance in my living room, so maybe this evening should be an exercise in "you can't always get what you want". Or maybe I should just say YAY TIPSY DANCING PORN! and leave it at that.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:31:16 UTC 5 years ago

Have a virtual drink! And thank you very much.

[info]zeenell

August 29 2006, 05:00:36 UTC 5 years ago

...*blinks*

I like.

*rereads it* nifty. Besides, fraser + dancing = otp.

fraser + dancing + ray + sex = ot4

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:31:55 UTC 5 years ago

Hee! You can't go wrong with Fraser + dancing + Ray + sex.

[info]tex

August 29 2006, 05:51:52 UTC 5 years ago

Whoa, this was wonderfully hot. It makes sense that Fraser, buttoned up Fraser, would be turned on by the free, easy way Ray moves his body. The image of them dancing in Ray's apartment - mmm, it makes me sigh.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:32:53 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks so much. Let me just say that a lot of this story draws on my own experience. Dancing is a magnificently expressive mode of communication.

[info]ignazwisdom

August 29 2006, 05:56:50 UTC 5 years ago

Very charming, very hot! And I'm totally with Fraser on the girly drinks.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:33:49 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you. And I will admit here that White Russians were the first mixed drinks I was ever introduced to, by a boyfriend who wanted to get into my pants.

[info]sam80853

August 29 2006, 07:50:03 UTC 5 years ago

God, this is SO sweet and HOT! I love dancing fic like everybody else apparently.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:34:31 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks - and there can never be too much dancing fic!

[info]proserpina_kore

August 29 2006, 09:59:59 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, that was just delicious.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:35:05 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you kindly!

[info]qe2

August 29 2006, 11:23:59 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, what a dynamite way to start a day. Delicious (and not just the White Russian). Thank you.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:35:24 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

[info]brooklinegirl

August 29 2006, 11:29:09 UTC 5 years ago

oh, DANCING! and slightly tipsy Fraser! and they're just so - happy and content and HOT together! ♥ and this:

"Holy fuck," said Ray, staring at Fraser, who was sprawled across the couch in the most un-Mountie-like pose Ray had ever seen.

"I can do naked," said Fraser smugly.


nrrrrrgh. and this:

"The way you dance," he said, punctuating his words with a twist of his hand that wrenched a groan from Ray's throat. "It makes me want to fuck you."

I think that might be the hottest thing Fraser has ever said.

YAY for stopping, dropping, and porning! I APPROVE.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:38:01 UTC 5 years ago

Haha, you picked out my favorite bit - the naked line!

And I think that many of us share the kink of Fraser saying "fuck" because, OMG. Fraser.

Thanks so much for the nice words, and for the prompt that got my brain going on this.

[info]akite

August 29 2006, 13:36:55 UTC 5 years ago

Ummm...tasty, but it makes me want a White Russian and it's too early in the day for that. *g*

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:38:21 UTC 5 years ago

Here, have a virtual drink! :-)

[info]lucifercircle

August 29 2006, 14:18:21 UTC 5 years ago

Slightly tipsy Fraser is fun!

And:
"It was your dancing," whispered Fraser, low and husky, and at that moment Ray didn't care if it was the dancing or the vodka or aliens beaming sex rays at them from outer space,
Made me snort with laughter.
Good job.

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:38:55 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you very much! And honestly, doesn't every fandom need "aliens made them do it" fic?

[info]sdwolfpup

August 29 2006, 14:59:56 UTC 5 years ago

Oh man, this was hot and funny and really fantastic. I loved it! So many great lines. This was just...man, gut-punch:

His hair had fallen across his forehead, making him look unbearably young and sweet. "The way you dance," he said, punctuating his words with a twist of his hand that wrenched a groan from Ray's throat. "It makes me want to fuck you."

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 16:39:43 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you very much. Fraser letting his hair down and actually saying "fuck" is a particular kink of mine.

[info]eledhwenlin

August 29 2006, 16:48:07 UTC 5 years ago

I have a kink for dancing!Fraser. I love this. :D

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 22:05:32 UTC 5 years ago

Aw, thanks. I think everybody has a kink for dancing!Fraser!

[info]beledibabe

August 29 2006, 17:19:50 UTC 5 years ago

Yay for the dancing!

Yay for the hawt!

Yay for you!

::twirls::

\o/

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 22:06:18 UTC 5 years ago

Aw, thank you! And twirling (and your icon) - so apropos!

[info]bertybertle

August 29 2006, 18:57:01 UTC 5 years ago

Nicenicenicenicenice! And nice! *claps hands* And SO clever to make such pretty in only 24 hours! Well done!

[info]isiscolo

August 29 2006, 22:08:47 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you very much! And I have to say, writing that many words in one day is possibly a record for me. Ordinarily I'm a much slower writer.

[info]marialima

August 29 2006, 23:19:39 UTC 5 years ago

I repeat what BLG said: hottest thing ever!!

"The way you dance...It makes me want to fuck you. just GAH

[info]isiscolo

August 30 2006, 03:14:25 UTC 5 years ago

Yay thanks! Mmm Fraser wanting to fuck...what was the question, again?

[info]tharaist

August 30 2006, 02:05:13 UTC 5 years ago

Most enjoyable read, thank you!

[info]isiscolo

August 30 2006, 03:14:41 UTC 5 years ago

Glad you liked it!
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